IELTS 9 Test 3

　　Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required.

　　Public health is doubtless of enormous significance to individuals as we need healthy bodies to work and to enjoy life; public health has also been playing a pivotal role in a country's development because it can exert tremendous influence on many aspects of a country, like economy, social stability and so on. But, how can we promote public health? Regarding to this issue, the public's opinion seems to be divided.

　　Some people tend to believe that the best way to increase public health is adding more sports facilities. Based on some researches, the main reason why people living in modern society are inclined to shy away from the gym is not because they don't understand the necessity of doing sports but because there is a conflict between their limited free time and the scarce sports facilities. Moreover, they confess they would do exercise more frequently if sports facilities were equipped in their neighbourhoods. Additionally, installing more exercise equipments in public area can stimulate more people to join the crowd of doing sports, therefore to achieve the goal of improving public health.

　　Admittedly, doing sports can be beneficial to promoting public health. But it's impact is quite limited. There are still more need to be done other than simply increasing the number of sports facilities available to the public. This is because to achieve the goal on public health depends on other factors as well, such as people's diet, the technology of medicine. Only when the government combines these factors together can a much better result achieved. Furthermore, we are unique individuals. In other words, we have different means to stay healthy. For example, in my country, compared with doing sports in gyms, the majority of people prefer playing Tai Chi or doing square dancing, which suggests that we should cater to the interests of the public in regard to encouraging them to keep fit.

　　To conclude, with all the factors taken into consideration, the government should do more than just offering more sports facilities. One of the efficient and effective measures can be raising the public awareness of developing a healthy and balanced diet.
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