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为了给大家积累相关的话题词汇,我们将抽取部分大作文题目,给大家进行思路分析+词伙准备,大家学习起来~

今日话题主题是大家比较头疼的犯罪话题~


IELTS

大陆

2020.01.04 Task2

In some countries, criminal trials are shown on television so that the general public can watch them. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

题目解析:

题型:优缺点题目

题材:犯罪话题

对于优缺分析的题目,需要先确定的是讨论对象。本题的讨论对象是公开犯罪审判过程,那么主体段就是需要分析这个措施的优点和缺点。

本文主题criminal trials are shown on television可以改写成以下的名词短语:

the representation/coverage of criminal trials/criminal judgments/criminal judicial procedures


建议各位烤鸭可以把写作分2步走:

1, 头脑风暴去构想出合适的词伙;

2, 2,连词成句,按照词汇之间的逻辑关系,选择合适的语法句型表达出来。


以下是分论点以及论据的词汇参考:


Advantages:

Deterrent effect

First-time offenders/hardened perpetrators/potential criminals

Actions have consequences

Think twice

Administer objective and balanced judgement

Under supervision/scrutiny of authority and public

Avoid biased/skewed view


Disadvantages:

Violate/intrude on/infringe on the offender’s privacy

Factual accounts

Expose the offenders to the public

Tarnish/smear his reputation

Resent society/hold a grudge against society/Go revenge

Surge of copycat crime

Learn techniques of crime

Criminal tendency/ premeditated crime

Imitate

Disordered


OK~

以上是针对此话题的部分相关词伙,同学们可以练手起来,根据提示词汇来完成你的文章8~


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